I FIGURED I COULD LET YOU IN ON THE TUG-OF-WAR ROUGH DRAFT OF MY "EGO" VS MY "ALTER-EGO'S" WRITING PROCESS & PROGRESS ON THIS SONG-RAW AND AS-IS FOR NOW:
(This is something only a songwriter and arranger would understand :) But if you're not, feel free to voyeur:
“WAR”
CHORUS:
These battle scars are making it hard
For you and me to ever think that we could make it this far
You’re earning your stripes, but breaking the laws
This battlefield is not appealing to my breakable heart
You thinking you’re smart and playing your games
I feel like pointing at you, getting at you, taking my aim
So who’s to blame and who’s to shame
Gotta be crazy
Think you phase me
And I’m taking your name
(Listen to me- Yeah!)
VERSE 1:
(:21)
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2-
3-
4-
:37
(Listen to me- Ahhh War!)
5-
6-
7-
:50
(Listen to me-Yeah!)
8- Boy you better start listening to me, before you learn what really missing me means
CHORUS:
These battle scars are making it hard
For you and me to ever think that we could make it this far
You’re earning your stripes, but breaking the laws
This battlefield is not appealing to my breakable heart
You thinking you’re smart and playing your games
I feel like pointing at you, getting at you, taking my aim
So who’s to blame and who’s to shame
Gotta be crazy
Think you phase me
And I’m taking your name
VERSE 2:
(1:16)
1-
2-
3-
4-
1:31
(Listen to me- Ahhh War!)
5-
6-
7-
8- Boy you better start listening to me, before you learn what really missing me means
1:50
(Listen to me- Ahhh War!)
CHORUS:
These battle scars are making it hard
For you and me to ever think that we could make it this far
You’re earning your stripes, but breaking the laws
This battlefield is not appealing to my breakable heart
You thinking you’re smart and playing your games
I feel like pointing at you, getting at you, taking my aim
So who’s to blame and who’s to shame
Gotta be crazy
Think you phase me
And I’m taking your name
(half) BRiDGE:
2:08
(First you were adoring me)
(No boring me)
(Now look at you, that I catch you now you go to war with me)
(Even the score with me?)
(Listen to me-Ahhh)
2:24
CHORUS:
These battle scars are making it hard
For you and me to ever think that we could make it this far
You’re earning your stripes, but breaking the laws
This battlefield is not appealing to my breakable heart
You thinking you’re smart and playing your games
I feel like pointing at you, getting at you, taking my aim
So who’s to blame and who’s to shame
Gotta be crazy
Think you phase me
And I’m taking your name
CHORUS:
These battle scars are making it hard
For you and me to ever think that we could make it this far
You’re earning your stripes, but breaking the laws
This battlefield is not appealing to my breakable heart
You thinking you’re smart and playing your games
I feel like pointing at you, getting at you, taking my aim
So who’s to blame and who’s to shame
Gotta be crazy
Think you phase me
And I’m taking your name
VERSE 4:
3:04
1-
2-
3-
4-
3:17
(Listen to me-Ahhh War! )
5-
6-
7-
8- Boy you better start listening to me, before you learn what really missing me means
CHORUS:
These battle scars are making it hard
For you and me to ever think that we could make it this far
You’re earning your stripes, but breaking the laws
This battlefield is not appealing to my breakable heart
You thinking you’re smart and playing your games
I feel like pointing at you, getting at you, taking my aim
So who’s to blame and who’s to shame
Gotta be crazy
Think you phase me
And I’m taking your name
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